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your kisses smell of roses by =Nirelleth:iconNirelleth:

Categories Photography > People & Portraits > Expressive

©2009 =Nirelleth
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Your kisses smell of roses
your lips taste like candy
in a sugar sweet world

model, concept, postprocessing: me
make up: Diva Make up
photographer: fotomotiv.ch

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=Stranger-Inside May 25, 2009, 10:26:25 AM
Great idea with your lips. There are things however that bother me ever so slightly. Shallow DOF is always good but not as good when one of the model's eyes are out of focus(feels as if one half of your face is not there). Also it might help to seem more interested. A powerful tool that portrait photographers use is to engage their audience with models whose eyes stand out and/or tell a story.

Otherwise good lighting and pose. The fairness of your skin really helps with this type of photo.

Hope this helps and that I wasn't too harsh. Keep up the good work =).
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*Killercatkiara May 24, 2009, 11:37:34 AM
Die Lippen erinnern mich an diese Amerikanischen Zuckerstangen, die man zu Weihnachten an den Weihnachtsbaum hängt XD
Also ist mein Fazit hier zu: Deine Bilder schaffen es mir Hunger auf was süßes zu machenXD

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~kgstv May 24, 2009, 11:42:00 AM
beautiful colors and tones. the model is stunning!

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*Arcalian May 24, 2009, 1:40:59 PM
:aww:

Brings new meaning to the phrase "candy striper"

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=CSnyder May 24, 2009, 1:43:39 PM
very lovely and nice soft glow
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=Nirelleth May 24, 2009, 1:52:01 PM
hehe ja, sie sind an süssigkeiten angelehnt. :giggle: mir macht es auch hunger auf süsses, obwohl das nichts tolles ist.

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=Nirelleth May 24, 2009, 2:25:47 PM
it is the same model as usual, me ;) but thanks :hug:

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~BloodandBlisters May 24, 2009, 3:02:05 PM
Great concept, really nice eyes too. :)

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on planet Bullshit

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~kgstv May 24, 2009, 5:03:09 PM
lol I know :XD:

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