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Your kisses smell of roses
your lips taste like candy
in a sugar sweet world

model, concept: me
make up: Diva Make up
photographer: fotomotiv.ch
postprocessing: :iconsamgbx:

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May 24, 2009
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:iconstranger-inside:
Great idea with your lips. There are things however that bother me ever so slightly. Shallow DOF is always good but not as good when one of the model's eyes are out of focus(feels as if one half of your face is not there). Also it might help to seem more interested. A powerful tool that portrait photographers use is to engage their audience with models whose eyes stand out and/or tell a story.

Otherwise good lighting and pose. The fairness of your skin really helps with this type of photo.

Hope this helps and that I wasn't too harsh. Keep up the good work =).
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~TalentedPhotographer Jan 10, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
kewel ^^
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Mood: Love !ChoCoFresa Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wwoow sweet lips :3
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:iconnirelleth:
Aw, thank you :heart:
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!ChoCoFresa Dec 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
youre welcome
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:iconbetuwefotograaf:
~Betuwefotograaf Jan 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Cool....and candy....
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:iconplastickheart:
I love the lips! :kiss:
i think it might look better if its a little darker, its too bright.
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:iconnirelleth:
Thanks for the idea, I personally like it like that though.
:hug:
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:icontattootheworldart:
fantastic! she looks like a doll.
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:iconseraerith:
Nice makeup.
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