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Little girl with broken wings by =Nirelleth:iconNirelleth:



Little girl with broken wings

Little girl that wants to die
Who has broken your wings to fly?

Who has wounded your spirit so
that only one wish remains: to go?

Who has torn your soul apart
Broke in pieces your little heart?

Who left you there all alone
never finding your way home?

Who has stolen your last dreams?
There aren't anymore; so it seems

Who put out the hope's small flame
making you believe we're all the same?

Who raped your sweet innocence
And left you now - with no defense?
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My wings were broken long ago
who has done so, I don't know

My spirit is wounded but so deep
I can't tell you what made me bleed

The wounds in my heart can never heal
is pain everything that's left to feel?

I know that here I cannot stay
but home is still too far away

My dreams, they faded with daylight
and this world's cold n'cruel sight

Hopes cannot survive dark despair
and I'm caught in its enclosing lair

Innocent I could never be
because the one to blame is ME.
©2006-2009 =Nirelleth
:iconnirelleth:

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My best poem so far.
I really should start writing again.

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:iconheretimestandsstill:
i really like this poem the separation of the two stanzas into questions and answers makes it very unique and it reminds me of a poem we studied at school

an instant fave :)

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'I haven't taken a breath,
Since we last spoke,
And suffocating never felt so good.'

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:iconheretimestandsstill:
oh i forgot to ask ... what picture do you mean?

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'I haven't taken a breath,
Since we last spoke,
And suffocating never felt so good.'

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:iconnirelleth:
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This picture here =)
And thanks a lot... Which poem was it, that you have studied in school?
:iconpsycopathic:
I love the poem and the way it is set up, the two parts to it makes it unique. Great work.

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"Violence is what corrupts us,
Guns are what imprison us,
Death is what awaits us."

Said by, me bitchs, Thomas Erickson
:iconinag:
very good job! I especially like all those rethorical questions...

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The camera makes everyone a tourist in other people's reality, and eventually in one's own. Susan Sontag

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:iconnirelleth:
Thanks so much!

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What Have I done?
:iconbirdkiller:
I couldn't help but envision a very macabre children's book as I read this. Like if Tim Burton did a kid's book... on peyote.

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:star: The world is mine, and it owes me a living.
Proud big brother of garbagegirl89.
:iconnirelleth:
Well, since I love all Tim Burton's work, I take this as a compliment... ;)

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What Have I done?
:iconbirdkiller:
It was definitely meant as a compliment.

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:star: The world is mine, and it owes me a living.
Proud big brother of garbagegirl89.

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