Beautiful shot and model, but it doesn't really show weariness. It might be better without the poem. The German version especially strikes me as someone who's tired of life, but you look very... alert? here.
Well yeah, the text is just a song text that came to my mind, it is not supposed to be an interpretation of the text, you are right there are lots of differences.
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